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SELF-INTRODUCTION SPEECH The One-Point Speech (Self-Introduction) A common first speaking assignment is the one-point speech, in which the speakers task is to establish only one main idea (the thesis). This type of speech requires a thesis that is clear and simple, and it is developed as follows: Introduction As indicated, the first three steps enact the introduction to the speech. "Wake up!" is the device to get the audiences attention, such as an interesting story, a startling statistic, or an unexpected fact. "This concerns you" shows listeners how the topic relates to them; it gives them reason to pay attention and to take the speech seriously. "Generally speaking" states the thesis of the speech. "Generally speaking" also forms a natural transition to the body of the speech, represented by the heading "For example." The body develops the thesis by presenting whatever supporting materials are needed to support the claims in the thesisexperiences, stories, facts, and opinions, arranged in whichever order is most effective. Finally, "So what?" signals the twofold function of the conclusion: drawing together the important ideas of the speech and making a final lasting impression on the audience. Answering "So what?" points out what the sup-porting material leads to and gives listeners cues about what they should believe or do. The following short example of a one-point speech has the thesis "Using a personal computer has changed how I study." The sections of the speech are indicated in brackets. [WAKE UP!] When my parents went to college, they did their assignments with a mechanical typewriter and a slide rule. They arent old, but this technology seems as ancient now as the slate tablets of the 1800s. [THIS CONCERNS YOU] When I told them I needed a computer for college, they were surprised. Some of you may also have had trouble explaining this to your parents. [GENERALLY SPEAKING] But using a personal computer has changed how I study. [FOR EXAMPLE] I take it to the library, and its much easier to take notes about what I read. I can call up databases for my research class in political science. I actually revise papers after Ive written them. I use electronic mail to ask the professor a question when theres something I dont understand. I download articles from the Internet. And I even write final exams on the computer whenever I can. [SO WHAT?] I cant imagine being a college student in the precomputer age. We should all stop to realize how much our lives have changed.Being short and simple, the one-point speech is a good way to master the basic structure of a speech. For this first speech, you may have a day or more to prepare. But the five-step structure of the one-point speech is also useful whenever you have to speak impromptuon the spur of the moment. When you raise your hand to speak at a meeting or in class, remembering the structure of the one-point speech will help you state your point briefly, clearly, and effectively. The Speech of Introduction For example, you might open with a statement such as "Unlike most of us, John Patterson has never lived out of this town." The contrast between John and his classmates should capture the audiences attention and interest. This achieves the "Wake up!" function of the one-point speech. (You can put yourself in the place of John to talk about yourself.) Your next statement might be, "Johns experience can give us insight into the sense of roots that many of our ancestors had but most of us lack today." This identifies how you will make Johns experience relevant to the audience, fulfilling the "This concerns you" step in the one-point speech. Then you might state the thesis: "This town is so much a part of Johns identity that he cannot imagine himself apart from it." This step matches "Generally speaking" in the one-point speech. It both states the idea that you intend to establish and provides a natural transition to the body of the speech. The next step is to support this thesis. You might do it by referring to key events in Johns life that are closely identified with the town: growing up where everyone knew everyone else, participating in parades and celebrations, living as an adult in the same house that he occupied as a child, and watching things change around him as others moved into or out of town. These experiences are the supporting material, corresponding to "For example" in the one-point speech. Decide which order to present them in and how much detail to provide. Finally, conclude by answering the implicit question "So what?" You might say something like, "So, the next time you read statistics about how often people move, or the next time you think about how many careers you might have during your life, remember that some people choose to nurture their roots where they stand. John Patterson is a thriving example." PRACTICING THE SPEECH Outlining Your Speech On the other hand, neither is it a good idea to speak impromptuwithout preparation, trusting that a flash of inspiration will strike you as you speak. Most successful speakers aim for middle ground with an extemporaneous speech, meaning that they have a clear sense of the main ideas and how to organize them, but they have not planned the speech in advance word for word. In speaking extemporaneously, an outline of the speech is a tremendous help. In fact, two outlines are even more helpful: a preparation outline and a presentation outline. PREPARATION OUTLINE Main Idea: PRESENTATION OUTLINE Main Idea: Because you are familiar with the ideas of the speech, seeing the phrase "Same house" will remind you of the statement you want to make about how John still lives in the room he occupied as a child and how that experience has affected his perspective on life. You may never need to refer to the presentation outline while you are speaking, but if you do, a quick glance at the words "Same house" will remind you of the point you want to make. You probably can reduce the presentation outline to fit on index cards, which are easier to handle than loose sheets of paper. For the first speech, you may need only one index card; three or four cards will usually be enough even for complex speeches. extemporaneous _____________________________________________________ A Strategy for Introducing Yourself to Others THE SITUATION MAKING CHOICES What else might you consider? 2. What is the most relevant information to relay to your instructor and fellow students? Should you describe: your primary likes and dislikes? where you are from? what your hobbies and personal interests are? why you are fearful of speaking in public? What other information about yourself might you include in your speech? WHAT IF . . . 1. Your public speaking classmates are evaluating your speech for a
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